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Bleach at the beach

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I found it a catchy title ^^

So it's summer , time to drool over the hot babes with bikinis and bake under the sun.Or dig some in adn tickle there feetsies XD

I always try my best to make the image almost like the original character so can u guys see who this is from Bleach??

I took her cous most woulden't think of tickling her anyway :p most popular would be the main characters anyway but what of the others ?? aha a big and shy girl getting some lovly tickles from her own capt'n aint that awfull XD


edit: eh tried to colour it , also did a crappy revamp
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It's always hard critiquing a WIP, since the sketch lines catch the eye a bit. However, what appears to be the focus of the image are the feet, and I have to say, they look incredible. The stretching of the left foot is very well done. They look very real.

There are a couple of points I would noticed, though. First would be that I think the toes need a little more curve. They look a bit too straight, too much like fingers, or else too much as if you're looking at the from the top. Toes, from above, look straight and flat. From the bottom, though, they have very deep, well-defined curves that act a lot like springs or shock suspensions during walking and running.

My second observation has to do with the right foot, which I think you may have noticed as well. The curves seem a little off on the outside edge. I think it curves into the heel a bit late, but I could be wrong on that. Either way, it looks a little flatter than the left.

Also, I think you should flex the left foot forward a little bit more. It's a strange but reflexive reaction when being tickled to point the balls of the feet toward the sensation, and while you have the toes' reaction down pat, the direction of the ankle-to-ball seems a bit stiff.

Anyways, as I said, it's hard to judge things in a WIP-state, but I have to say that the feet, despite my previous comments, are a work of art. They look very touchable, very real. They tug at the eye and makes the viewer feel as if they can be actually fill the skin, muscle and shape of real feet.

Good work.